This is our first draft for the script. There are many things that I wish to improve on, for example adding more details to the descriptions. I also feel that we should give each of our characters a name because at the moment they are labelled as 'Bully 1' for instance. I feel that giving the characters names make the trailer more realistic to an actual film.
Another factor of the script that needs updating is the title page. At the moment we have not come up with a title and I believe that this needs to be done as soon as possible.
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